+Yumi+

Hello there, I seemed to come across this and gave you Gallery a view and wanted to pop in a Critique.

You are on a very good track, I think you have a lot of talent for being so young. Let me start off with some good things. The hair has lots of values and highlights which I admire about you. The fact that you have a background in there is fantastic. It has some nice shading on the trees and texture to the wood, good job!

However, I did notice in your work that the characters you draw, share the same face. It is something I find is very common in younger artist. I think you need to work with more facial expressions and dig into some exercises that will help you with that.

Also I might suggest you try to draw hands and things every once and a while, they really are not that scary to draw. And thought the dress is pretty and i like the design, the wrinkles in it seem a little unnatural. I would suggest not using so much of a sideways V when drawing and maybe spend a little more time on the line art because it seems a bit rushed. ^^

You are on a very good start and you are good for your age. You Remind me a lot of Arina Temuria (i probably spelled that wrong) but I think you have a good artist road a head of you, keep it up!